For the second day of the blog tour for Bane of Ashkarith, Katie Jenkins hosted me on her blog authorkmjenkins.com. She was lots of fun to work with, and she had some great questions for me. Hopefully you all will enjoy seeing the answers as much as I enjoyed working on them!
You can find the interview at the link above. Enjoy!
Have a question for me that I didn’t answer? Leave it in the comments below, and I’ll answer it as soon as I can!
This is a bit of a special post, but I wanted to let all of you know more about the launch for Bane of Ashkarith. As the title of this post indicates, I’m doing a blog tour! I’ve got lots of great authors who have graciously allowed me to do author and character interviews, Q&A’s, and other guest posts. The tour starts today and will go through to the 30th, the day right before the book launches.
I’ll be sharing the guest posts throughout the tour via my Facebook author’s page. Additionally, beginning the 29th and running through the 31st, I have a launch party going on through Facebook. There’s a great line up of authors on the schedule to share about themselves and their books, and we’re going to be having fun games with prizes at the end. So if you like reading, particularly fantasy, then head over to the event and check it out!
There will be more information about Bane of Ashkarith and the characters in upcoming posts, so keep an eye out for those during the blog tour. With that said, tomorrow I’ll be interviewing with Katie Jenkins. Be on the look out for that link and the info about it on my Facebook page and on my other writing sites. I’ll also post the link and information up here on the Fantasy Nook.
This week marks the last post about global mapping. We’re going to take a look at climate and how that affects your map. This’ll be a shorter discussion because you’ve already done the majority of the work. At this point, you’re just going to spend a little time thinking about the climate involved in each area in your story and how that will affect your writing. Climate affects a lot of those little details that readers like to see so they can be immersed in the story. So let’s take a look at how.
Climate and Culture
You might be sitting at your computer or looking at your phone wondering what I’m talking about. You might be asking, Ariel, how on earth can climate affect culture? Isn’t it just a nice way to throw some obstacles in my hero’s path?
No. It’s not. Climate actually does affect quite a bit about how a culture develops. For instance, if your hero lives in a culture where the climate is tropical and the terrain tangled jungle, this is going to affect what they eat, what they wear, how they build their houses, and much more about how they live their lives. This culture is less likely to be agricultural because you can’t farm in a jungle without significant clearing of the land. Instead, they might be hunters and gatherers.
Let’s take a look at one more example. Say the climate is an arid, desert-like environment with one or two oases for water and a delta running through it. Well, now the situation is much different. These people will likely migrate to the river to plant crops and raise cattle because there’s no way they can sustain life in the desert conditions otherwise. They’re going to wear light-weight but concealing clothing when out in the desert sand because they have to protect themselves from the sun. But at the river or an oasis, they might wear little to nothing because the heat is stifling and it’s too muggy for comfort. Their food isn’t going to be the same as the jungle tribe’s either. They’re going to raise it themselves or grow it in the rich soil at the delta or floodplains created by the river.
Hopefully, if you weren’t convinced before that climate could affect culture, you are now. So, take some time to think over what types of climates your cultures will live in and think through all the ways that climate could shape their culture and way of life. The ways are many and varied, so have fun with it! Make it logical, but be creative.
Conclusion
I promised this would be a short post, and so it is. Really, climate is going to be determined mainly by what land features you chose to place where. The two go hand-in-hand. You can’t have snowy regions where you placed a steaming jungle or a jungle where you placed glaciers. So, the important thing you need to worry about with climate is how it affects the inhabitants of that biome, both human and otherwise. It has the biggest affect on the cultures of the lives there, and that’s what your focus should be on since you’re going to be writing about those people who have to deal with it every day, or for some chunk of time, at least.
Have any tips for what to consider when it comes to climate’s affect on culture? Drop it in the comments below! If you have any questions about the topic, feel free to leave that in the comments too!
Hey, everybody! We’re on week 9 of Work-In-Progress Wednesday, and today’s excerpt is from Bane of Ashkarith! The book is launching on the 31st of July but is available for preorder on the 14th on Amazon and Kobo!
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Night had fallen. The workers outside were finishing up, and the
candles were guttering on the table near his work. Kaidan straightened and
twisted to pop his back. He’d finally
pieced together all the clues to determine the location where Banach had hidden
the scrolls the journal spoke of. He
jotted it down, his heart thumping against his ribcage, and then sat back, staring
at it in disbelief. How could it be located there? Did this place even exist
anymore?
The voice of his wife and the workers’ headman drew closer, and he listened to
her talking to the man. “Respect is important to everyone in this situation, I
know. So, since we’ve proven what we came to prove, we’ll be finishing up with
the dig tomorrow.”
“Much
appreciated, ma’am. I’ll inform the workers.”
“See that
they’re careful when they rebury the remains, please.” His wife pulled aside
the flap and ducked inside the tent as she spoke.
“Understood,
ma’am. They’ll be told to take care.” The headman glanced inside the tent. “Evening,
Master Kaidan.”
Kaidan smiled at the man. “Good
evening, Leotwo.”
The man’s gaze
wandered around the inside of the tent. Then he returned Kaidan’s smile and
ducked his head. “Well, I’ll take my leave for the evening, then.”
The two of them bid him farewell, but Kaidan’s attention was only partially on the
headman and the current situation. His wife sat down on the mat beside him,
tracing her fingers down his spine. “What’s that?” She pointed at the paper he
was holding loosely in his fingers.
“The
location.” He crumpled the paper in his fist.
“And?”
“You’re right…
It is a suicide mission.” His stomach dropped, and he wondered what they were
thinking. They couldn’t do this, could they?
“But where do
we have to go?” She began massaging the knots out of his
shoulders.
He closed his eyes, groaning when she hit a sensitive spot
between his shoulder blades. “Ashkarith.
We have to go to Ashkarith.”
“Ashkarith?”
His wife’s hands stilled against his back. “No one even knows for sure if the
city still exists, though.”
Kaidan sucked in a deep breath. “I
know…”
“The jungle
supposedly reclaimed it, Kaidan. How are we going to find that?”
Kaidan shrugged. He didn’t know that
either. Only that it would be one Rith-cursed nightmare to do it. “No one will
trek in there, and the captains of those new-fangled flying ships refuse to fly
over the spot. They say it’s cursed.”
“That doesn’t
answer how we’ll find it. That just means we’re going alone.” She resumed
kneading knots from his stiff muscles.
“I know. We’re
going to go to the city of Arabhin. It’s the closest to the former city’s
location, and if anyone knows whether or not the city survived the jungle and
where to find it, it’ll be the natives.” He slumped over the table to give his
wife better access to his back and the sore muscles.
“But that’s
still deep in the jungle. No one will fly us there.”
“True, but we
might be able to find someone to lead us there.” Kaidan sighed as his wife’s
nimble fingers removed the aches and tension in his back.
“Kaidan, you
know what’s said about the Faelkishians.” Zerua wrapped her arms around his
waist and rested her head on his back.
Kaidan snickered. “Come bearing
gifts unless you want to be eaten alive?”
She smacked his side lightly. “You
know that’s not what they say.”
Kaidan sat up and drew her into his arms, stretching out on the
mat with her beside him. Perhaps it was the wrong time to joke around about the
dangers of the trip. He sighed. “I know, I
know. They’re unpredictable and vicious.”
“That doesn’t
concern you?” She traced his cheekbones with her fingertips.
“We’ll find a
way, Zer. There’s no other choice.”
“We’re going
to get ourselves killed.” She bit her lip.
Kaidan leaned in and pressed a soft kiss to the tip of her nose.
“What better way to die than in pursuit of
truth?”
She rolled her eyes, but his words drew a smile from her. “Perhaps of old age in your sleep?”
Kaidan brushed his lips over hers with a smile. “Boring.”
Her lips flirted with his own, and her breathy laughter greeted
his comment. “I thought the same.”
“So, it’s
settled? We’re going to go after this?” His heartbeat thundered in his ears,
and his breathing became ragged.
She nodded, her smile fading. “I
don’t see another option. Now that we’ve dug up this, we’ve got to find out if
it’s true. I don’t know about you, but I don’t want to believe that wrong is
right and truth is untruth for the rest of my life.”
His gaze dropped to the small space between them. “Neither do I.”
“Then we’ll
set out for Ashkarith as soon as we finish up here.” She tangled her fingers in
his hair. “But for now, let’s take an opportunity to rest. I have a feeling we
won’t be doing much of that in the near future.”
Kaidan gathered her closer to him. She’s right. Whatever we find in that jungle is going to turn our world upside down, and I don’t think either of us will have a chance to rest easy once we find out the truth. He closed his eyes with a sigh. The journal’s already disturbing enough. His mind drifted as the lack of sleep for the last few months caught up with him. Ashkarith. City of the dead. What would they find there? His breathing slowed, and after a few more minutes, he was out.
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That’s it for today! What are all of you working on? If you’d like to, feel free to drop an excerpt in the comments below. Also, feel free to give feedback on both what I’ve posted and on the things posted in the comments. Just keep all feedback respectful and constructive!
Bane of Ashkarith released on July 31st, and lots of people have been asking me about the book. Most of the time, people are curious about the blurb and what genre the book is. So, for everyone wondering what the book is all about and where to find it, this post is for you!
Blurb
Kaidan Tadegan is
working on a new site trying to prove the myth that two armies of the gods
clashed there. While on the dig site, he discovers the evidence he’s looking
for, but he gets more than he bargained for when he discovers a woman’s bones
in a section of the dig site where no other remains have been found.
As he digs the
bones out, he discovers a journal with the woman’s body, which tells a story
that, if true, will turn the myths of the old world and the established
concepts of good and evil on their heads. Startled by the find, Kaidan sets out
to discover whether the diary’s claims have any validity.
But when the
diary leads to a city that’s supposedly long gone, Kaidan’s journey becomes
more difficult than expected. Things become even more tangled when he discovers
that the city isn’t gone, but it’s no place for the living.
Unable to give up on his quest, he forges ahead. What lies ahead is uncertain, and even more uncertain is whether Kaidan will survive this quest. He has only two questions in his mind. Will he find the truth in this city of the dead? And will the world accept the truth?
Excerpt
Chapter One: Dubarin Hill
KAIDAN Tadegan straightened for a
moment, pausing in his work. He wiped the sweat from his brow and craned his
neck to see over the hill’s rise. The rest of the dig crew was still working on
the opposite side of the hill. Stretching, he picked his shovel back up and
returned to digging into the side of Dubarin Hill.
He
worked with fervor but also with care, not wanting to damage anything. The sun
glared down on him, roasting him alive, and he wiped the back of his neck with
a cloth. Nothing had rewarded him for his labor yet, but that didn’t mean it
wouldn’t. Perhaps he might find something on this side of the hill to answer
the questions they’d come here to answer.
He took
a deep breath, the musty scent of freshly turned soil filling his senses. Well,
even if they never determined whether those who had clashed here were the old
gods, they’d at least proven that there had been a battle. That was something.
They could hold their heads high when they spoke to the king of Argos about the
dig, and when they returned to the Society of the Learned, they’d have
something to report.
The hole
he was digging had turned into an open-roofed tunnel that sloped gradually
downward as he went. Perhaps he’d gone a bit overboard. But he had a good
feeling about this area. He could just sense it in his bones. There was
something here. He just had to find it.
At
around seven feet down into the side of the hill, his shovel struck something
with a dull thud. He tested the soil with the tip of the shovel, trying to
determine what it was. When he shifted some more dirt, he saw a flash of white
under the sun. More bones?
Kaidan
knelt in the hole and brushed the loose layer of dirt away. The yellow-white
bones of a corpse glared up at him in the harsh rays of the sun, dirt still
packed around the majority of the remains. He hadn’t found any bones on this
side of the hill, and he’d begun to think the battle hadn’t raged this far.
Perhaps they just hadn’t dug in the right places. It seemed they’d given up too
soon.
Kneeling, he brushed the dirt away and grabbed
a trowel, gently clearing packed clods of dirt and loose soil away from the
corpse. When he had, he backed further up the slope and sat on his heels,
staring down at it.
Inside
the tunnel, the bones rested. Time and worms had rotted through the clothing of
the deceased individual. The slender facial structure of the skull and the tiny
stature indicated it was a woman. He frowned. Who is this? They hadn’t found any women’s corpses in the
battlefield. What was this one doing all by herself out here?
A book
lay locked against the corpse’s chest, her skeletal hands clutching it to her
even in the rigor of death. He leaned down, seeking to pry it from the hands of
the skeleton. The hands wouldn’t budge. Strange. The tendons were long gone.
Nothing should be stopping him from moving the bones. Kaidan put his hands on
his hips. Well, destroying the corpse wouldn’t do. Too disrespectful to the
dead. He’d have to try a different angle. Jumping down into the hole again, he
tried to slide the book out of the corpse’s grasp.
This
time, the hands relinquished their prize, and he stared down at the book’s
unmarked leather cover, which was worn with age and crusted in dirt. A quiver
ran through him, and he grinned. What treasures of knowledge did this find
contain? He took a closer look at it, rubbing at the dirt on the corners before
pausing in his attempts to clean the item. The leather binding was in
remarkable condition for the age of the corpse.
He
glanced back at the bones. Far too old for the condition of the book. So how
had the skeleton come to be clutching the book in the tight grip of death? He
clambered back up to the mouth of his open-roofed tunnel and sat down, dropping
the book beside him. What secrets did the skeleton hold that she would never
share now? His mind whirred through the possibilities, and he glanced down at
the book. Perhaps it held the answers.
With his
pulse racing, he flipped open the cover and began fingering through the book,
which seemed to be a diary of some sort. The book’s pages were stuck together
with time and a dark brown substance, though they yielded with some gentle
prying. Upon closer examination, he realized it looked much like dried blood.
What had he stumbled across? Hopefully, nothing accompanied by a curse. He never
knew with old artifacts, and he’d run into some strange things before.
“Kaidan?
Kaidan, what are you doing over here?”
Kaidan
looked up to find Zerua strolling down the hill toward him. Unable to contain
the excitement, he jumped to his feet and waved to his wife, a grin spreading
across his face. “Zer, look what I found!” He pointed to the grave site and
waved the book.
She
rushed to see, a smile lighting up her gray eyes. “What is it?”
“I think
it’s some sort of burial site.” He crouched down on the edge of the pit he’d
ended at and set the book down between them. “It’s the first woman we’ve found
buried here.”
“Any
clues as to why she was buried here?” She knelt beside him and stared at the
bones.
He shook
his head and sat back on his heels. His attention returned to the book. “Not
yet. Let’s take a look at this book though. She was holding it.”
Zerua
reached out to touch the book lying on the grassy hillside, brushing her
fingers over the ancient leather. “This is in awfully fair condition for being
buried thousands of years ago.”
“Outside
maybe. I opened it briefly a moment ago, and it looks like there’s dried blood
caked to it. It’ll be a wonder if we can get pages apart to read any of it.” He
settled cross-legged on the ground beside his wife and pulled the book into his
lap. “Let’s see what we have here…”
He eased
the cover open, minding the brittle crackling of the paper as he did. The scent
of iron still lingered on the pages, and he frowned, flipping past the first
empty page to look at the next. “There’s writing on this one.”
His wife
leaned over his shoulder, pointing to the flaking black-brown substance. “Seems
strange that this substance on the pages didn’t render it illegible.”
“It’s
strange that the book is still intact at all.” He stared at the first words on
the page. “These are in an old form of Wyrdhan.”
“Can you
read it?” She rested her chin on his shoulder.
He bit
his lip and stared at the words for a moment longer before reading what he felt
was the best translation. “Sedra cannot be trusted. She has lied to them all,
but they do not know the extent to which she has deceived them.” His gaze
lifted to meet his wife’s wide-eyed stare. “What have we found?”
This week, we’re back with another fantasy sub-genre post! As a quick update, the plan is to move posts on this topic to Sundays as part of a new Sunday Sub-genres blog section. The posts will be every other week, just as they had been when they were on Fridays. This post is the first in that set of posts.
As I build up content, there will be some other new blog sections as well that will be posted on other days of the week. So, keep an eye out for those.
With that announcement out of the way, this week’s fantasy sub-genre is Superhero Fantasy. Most people might not think that superhero stories are fantasy, but given the elements they possess, almost all superhero stories are considered fantasy. Let’s take a look at the sub-genre.
Defining Superhero Fantasy
As mentioned earlier, most superhero stories are fantasy. However, let’s discuss a little more of what this sub-genre’s definition entails. Superhero fantasy usually involves a main character with some sort of super human ability, a strong sense of morality, and a hidden identity. Usually, the genre centers on fighting crime because, after all, that is what a superhero does.
Typically, superhero fantasy also involves villains that are unforgivably flawed. They must be stopped at all costs because they won’t stop unless someone makes them. There is no redeeming quality about the villains of superhero fantasy. Often, the villains also have a super human quality to them in superhero fantasy. Whether or not it’s an actual superpower may depend on the story.
Now, that’s all well and good, but what makes a superhero story truly a superhero fantasy? Well, the biggest thing that makes it fantasy is the presence of strong fantastical elements. Does the superhero have their abilities because they come from another planet like Superman? Or do they gain the abilities because of some strange, mystical (and definitely non-scientific) circumstance? If they do, chances are your superhero story is considered fantasy.
On the other hand, if your story has superheros with powers because of special suits or science experiments gone wrong, it’s more likely that your superhero story would be closer to the sci-fi side than fantasy. And if that’s the sort of story you’re writing, that’s okay. It’s just not the focus of this post. (Though some of the elements for writing it may end up being the same regardless.)
Writing Superhero Fantasy
With the definition of superhero fantasy clear in our minds, let’s take a look at writing it. These elements can actually be used to write any superhero story. The way you use them is what will determine whether it’s fantasy or sci-fi.
Superhero
It goes without saying that a superhero fantasy needs a superhero. The trouble is that superhero fantasy and heroic fantasy can get their lines crossed a bit here, so some discussion of what a main character should and should not be in a superhero fantasy is needed.
First off, a heroic fantasy usually involves one or more heroes, and those heroes may or may not have special abilities. That’s pretty straightforward, mostly. If they don’t have powers or it’s not one main character with the powers, chances are, you’re not writing about a superhero.
The more subtle difference in superhero fantasy versus heroic fantasy is in the character of the characters. Heroic fantasy’s characters are almost always going to be flawed. Sometimes even fatally so. Morality can be a bit of a gray area for these characters.
Not so with superhero fantasy. If you watch even a little bit of the superhero genre on TV or read comics, you’ll quickly notice that the main characters of these stories don’t have any gray areas with their morality (for the most part). They know right is right and wrong is wrong.
The bad guys aren’t going to get away on their watch if they have anything to say about it. Don’t bother trying to bribe these guys or throw them off the scent because they’re not going to give up until the villain is behind bars (or subjected to some form of justice).
This is an important part of crafting a superhero. The powers have to go hand-in-hand with a strong moral compass and unwillingness to compromise with evil, whatever that may be in a given story.
Despite their high moral code and strict adherence to it, superheros still have struggles. Often, superhero fantasy will go into the psychological struggles of the characters and will show why they ultimately choose good over evil. Or don’t if the goal of the story is to have a superhero gone bad.
Either way, superhero fantasy is going to explore who the superheros really are and what made them that way. The genre is heavy on characterization, so good characterization absolutely cannot be ignored.
Supervillains
This was mentioned earlier, but one of the defining traits of the antagonist for a superhero fantasy is that they’re a supervillain. Like the superhero, they have some sort of special power, but they’re using it for evil. Whatever their motivations, they won’t stop until the superhero puts an end to it.
Also mentioned above was the note that the supervillains have no redeeming traits. This is the biggest difference between heroic fantasy and superhero fantasy. Heroic fantasy might afford the villain some quarter by way of a redeeming quality or saving grace. Superhero fantasy doesn’t. After all, you have to balance out the unflinching, morally pure hero somehow. And what better way to do that than to have an utterly despicable antagonist?
But just because the supervillains are entirely evil doesn’t mean they’re flat. Superhero fantasy thrives on deep characterization, so if you’re going to write this genre, your readers are going to expect you to get deep into the psychological and emotional aspects of the villain. Why are they doing this? What’s their intention? What drove them to do what they are? All of those questions are ones superhero fantasy often explores.
Crime
Usually, superhero fantasy deals with crime. The superhero needs somewhere to turn his mind when he has such a hatred for evil. This comes out in fighting crime.
Fighting crime could occur in a number of ways. First, the character may be a vigilante, working without sanction or help from the local authorities. Arrow and his gang are a good example of this. Second, they might be working independently of law enforcement but with full support from the local authorities despite that. This would include heroes like Superman.
The final category is the superhero that works with law enforcement, even if law enforcement may not know about their two identities. For example, Barry Allen works for the police department in Central City, but he’s also the Flash. Not many of the cops he works with know this, but even as the Flash, he has the goodwill (if not the support) of the police department. A twist on this one that does seem more popular is to have superheros who worked with the government or in the military at some point or another. Quite a few popular superheros have done this, with Captain America being one of the better known heroes.
Conclusion
These are only the main things that make superhero fantasy what it is. There’s certainly more that can be learned about the genre. This should help you as you get your feet wet in the genre, but it should only be the starting point. I’ve added some additional resources and some examples of superhero fantasy below to help you as you do further research.
If you enjoy reading in the superhero fantasy sub-genre, what books do you recommend? You can put them in the comments. Just please ensure that you make a note in your comment if the book isn’t clean and appropriate for children since I do have some younger readers who may be reading through the comments too.
Further Reading and Resources:
Blogs:
Best Fantasy Books (This blog has a bit about the genre, but it also has a fair number of suggestions for books in the genre.)